LA+8+January




 * //When you have finished your rough notes, please work toward the following:

JOB 1: Double check your notes for 'sequence'. Although the questions were placed in sequence, I am allowing you liscence to rework this to fit your work style.

JOB 2: Begin you rough copy. Remember that this is ROUGH, and will be changing according to the topics I approach in the next few days. Do not be upset when I ask you to move things around.

These are the things I will be looking for in your writing:

-- proper sequencing -- effective imagery and description -- paragraph hooks (more on this to come) -- dialogue! -- sentence structure and paragraphing! I'm beginning to get grumpy about this -- proper punctuation, etc.

There has been some confusion as to what a rough copy of this might look like. Remember that what you are writing is called a 'personal narrative'. That is, it's a first person account of your day at the age of 25. Check the following example, based on the first slide of questions.

Rough copy due date: Friday, beginning of class

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